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Toerag
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0 posted 2003-01-02 03:19 PM


When I was just a lad of ten,
I worked all day and saved,
The dollar that I'd earned,
For a rainy day.

I kept it 'neath my pillow,
And I swear this is the truth,
Woke up the following morning
My dollar was now a tooth.

[This message has been edited by Toerag (01-03-2003 07:37 AM).]

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suthern
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1 posted 2003-01-02 03:22 PM


ROFL... Your tooth fairy was perhaps a tad confused? LOL I can sympathize... I STAY confused. LOL

Thanks for the grins, dear one... I enjoyed this very much! *S*

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-01-02 03:40 PM



That's one pocket-picking toothfairy, Toe...
You've got to learn to put your head ON the pillow...not your feet!  Hugs,

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-02-2003 03:40 PM).]

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3 posted 2003-01-02 04:04 PM


ROTFL. That was one mean tooth faery!
Salty
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4 posted 2003-01-02 04:42 PM


lol  Damn fairies.....can't trust anybody anymore.    enjoyed laughing over your last dollar though

~Salty

Corinne
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5 posted 2003-01-02 08:04 PM


lol - very cute.

Rainey - s/b rainy?

Peace, Toe man.

Cor

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6 posted 2003-01-02 11:16 PM


Mr. Toe, who did the tooth belong to? Just one the tooth fairy found somewhere? Maybe she ran out of money to leave under the other pillows, but she didn't have to snitch your dollar, did she? Mean old fairy......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-01-03 05:16 AM


I guess you would be the one to get a drunk tooth fairy, huh?
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8 posted 2003-01-03 05:29 AM


rotflmbo!  not only was it a drunk tooth fairy, it was a mean one too!!  Do ya think maybe he/she needed a slight attitude adjustment.....I bet Toe is just the one to give it to em to!  Too cute Toe!
GG
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9 posted 2003-01-03 06:17 AM


RofLol so did the tooth fairy come to take your money, punch you, knock your tooth out, and then leave with the money!?

..what a familiar story.. (kidding!)...haha this is great!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-01-03 08:56 AM


cute write...

M

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11 posted 2003-01-03 09:06 AM


Very confused and strange tooth fairy Toe.
Veryyyy strange....
Thanks for the chuckles!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Nan
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12 posted 2003-01-03 12:43 PM


Gotta have a talk with that fairy, Toe...

visitvenus
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13 posted 2003-01-03 12:46 PM


Toooooooo(th) funny!!!!!!!



-Venus

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-01-03 12:56 PM


Toe,
LOL, I didn't even find a tooth.

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15 posted 2003-01-03 03:09 PM


Toe darling man This is simply one of the best I’ve seen in a long time. I truly don’t get here enough but there is only so much time in the day. I’m glad I didn’t get to miss this utter beauty. The smile needs to be painted on today for sure, and this definitely painted it in, thank you darling heart. Beautiful work really beautiful


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Bill Charles
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16 posted 2003-01-03 03:28 PM


Toerag - now I'm confused, I thought it went the other way, you know, a dollar for a tooth????

BC

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17 posted 2003-01-09 04:27 AM


Toerag,
a good twist to the cliche...enjoyed muchly

Charisma
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18 posted 2003-01-09 08:38 AM


whooohoooo I love it....omg you are awesome

Charisma

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19 posted 2003-01-09 08:45 AM


That might not be so bad if you need dentures! Ha!

Deb

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