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Salty
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0 posted 2003-01-02 02:54 PM



Let me barefoot ballet across
the vineyard of your soul.
I have but one want..
to know the
Real
Inside of you.
Take a deeper dance
With me while I
separate the stems and the seeds.
Let me touch you in all those
organic places you have sheltered
from the world.
I can give of myself
once your image flows untainted
Share with meā€¦and taste the purity
of our vintage walk

© Copyright 2003 Salty - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-01-02 03:01 PM


gorgeous picture here!
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-01-02 03:09 PM


Yes, Salty...........          

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-02-2003 03:10 PM).]

Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2003-01-02 03:12 PM



WOW, is he a lucky guy!!

You think it will work with meadows too? we don't have vineyards overhere LOL

Great poem

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2003-01-02 03:22 PM


The wine of such an endeavor will I am sure become one of great value..

very nicely done.

Salty
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5 posted 2003-01-02 03:25 PM


Passing Shadows

  Thank you for dropping in and reading.
Just trying to make sure I get to the core, so I there won't be any surprises
garysgirl

  Thank you sweet Ethel.... I really enjoyed your write today also.


Titia Geertman

  I believe it will work in pasture...we have a lot of that here ourselves.  Why don't you write one  *S*.

btw I love that name Titia.  Thank you for reading me.

[This message has been edited by Salty (01-02-2003 05:09 PM).]

Salty
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6 posted 2003-01-02 03:32 PM


Cpat

Got to get to the root of things to see what the fruit really bares *S*.  Thank U
for stopping in.  Glad to see you back on board.

~Salty

Midnitesun
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7 posted 2003-01-02 04:05 PM


Enjoyed the sensual imagery here, Salty!

Salty
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8 posted 2003-01-02 05:05 PM


Thank you midnitesun....I always injoy hearing from you.


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

Magnus
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9 posted 2003-01-02 10:15 PM


Hey Texas....the vineyards are in California,  just ask Martie....

But the champagne is right here in your
words...

Yep,  get to the core of the grape and
see if it is seedless or not...

Like this one...

Salty
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10 posted 2003-01-03 01:38 AM


Magnus

  Well, I can dream about vinyards...can't I? *S*   I drank some homemade wine before..but I wouldn't recommend it . Maybe i'll just stick with that champagne you mentioned.

Thank you Magnus Man for stopping by.

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

regards2you
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11 posted 2003-01-03 02:23 AM




Salty,

Like this a great deal. Right from those very two first lines, it just keeps getting better and better...

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-01-03 04:09 AM


Lovely...James
Toerag
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13 posted 2003-01-03 07:38 AM


barefoot?...with your toes showing....ya wanna borrow a rag?....cute write cute gal..
Enchantress
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14 posted 2003-01-03 08:55 AM


Ooooh I love this!
Lovely images here!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 2003-01-03 09:00 AM


Beautiful Salty.  Yes......we need to know what lies inside, at the very center.......so lovely it carries the reader with it...
nakdthoughts
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16 posted 2003-01-03 10:33 AM


Hey Salty girl...your words are so sensually nice...

M

Cpat Hair
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17 posted 2003-01-03 10:50 AM


hope you didn't find any thorns in your soul after the dance....
Salty
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18 posted 2003-01-03 10:55 AM


Regards2U

That was my intention...for things to get better, and if that includes my writing then thats the bestest   Thank YOu for reading and responding

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Thank You JamesMichael for coming by...I'm glad you enjoyed

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Toerag

  Hey I love running around barefoot,and maybe I do need one of those toe rags....what exactly is one anyway???
  

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Enchantress

Thank you so much.....and thank u for stopping in to read.

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Gentle Spirit

that was what I was trying to get to alright....the center. I don't need any surprises     Thank you for reading me.

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nakdthoughts

  Thank You Maureen, I appreciate the read and response.  I surely enjoyed your last one as well.  *S*

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

Salty
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19 posted 2003-01-03 10:58 AM


Cpat

  lol well not yet anyway.  I can use a toerag I've heard if I need one....that might stop the bleeding.

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2003-01-03 11:05 AM


Salty
A pretty salty write, but I loved it.

Salty
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21 posted 2003-01-03 11:46 AM


And I love you loving it Seymour Tabin...thank you.


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

rainman
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22 posted 2003-01-05 12:50 PM


i saw the barefoot ballet in those lines.
her passion really impressed me...
all the best
-rainman-

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