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Bitter Bite
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Bitter Bite |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Bitter Bite I am missing you on this morning walk warmest sun can not stop coldness’s bitter breezes bite southern steps walking into drawing north’s lonely wind try as I do pulling thoughts of you closer to me still the damp just seems to seep through me “life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Great! I guess I have to start going backwards looking for your posts. Like a lot. Gentle breezes, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 this is sad, so empty feeling...I've known it. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, sad... ...and I know it right now........"Love makes the world go around" |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I know dear....I make all the ladies damp.......(or maybe it's cold sweats?)...LOL....nice write |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
a brilliant use of moderate alliteration in the way they all run/roll down. "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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