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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-02 12:42 PM


Breathing


in bottled up
blue
my dreams
bubble
touched by
you


“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-01-02 12:46 PM


Wow!
SPIRIT
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2 posted 2003-01-02 02:01 PM


You gotta love it. Great!

Gentle breezes,
Wafting through my consciousness.
A pleasant awakening,
Reminding me of the contentment's
Of my life.   ©spirit


  

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-01-02 03:02 PM


Amazing, you are...  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2003-01-03 11:39 AM


a few words to convey a great deal...
very nicely done... this style sits well with you I think.

visitvenus
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5 posted 2003-01-03 12:29 PM


Very nice!

-Venus

kaile
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6 posted 2003-01-03 11:48 PM


i like! helen, you are really a poet of few words and of great substance...
Denea Furr
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7 posted 2003-01-05 04:03 AM


It's amazing how you can take just a few words to thourally explain a true feeling. I like it.

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