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Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
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0 posted 2003-01-02 08:53 AM



Inhaled

Held

Recited
Until beats
Slowed

Exhaled
Perfect swirls
Of beauty


Your words

Get

Me

High....


Sunkissed.

[This message has been edited by Sunkissed (01-02-2003 10:46 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-01-02 09:03 AM


Sunkissed
Did you buy a ticket? Enjoyed

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-01-02 12:21 PM


*smiling*
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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California
3 posted 2003-01-03 07:01 PM



Sunkissed,

I really like this.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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