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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Yep!!!! LOL My perspective of me is different, |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yeah, we flies can do that sometimes. Thanks, Spirit. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sounds like an entomologist's nightmare rant. |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
If you don't mind me saying, I was reduced to something like Homeric laughter at the end of this poem. FANTASTIC. "entomologist's nightmare" very funny as well.  "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You know...when I read all those hey, mans the second time...they turned in to a-men. Is that poetic justice?  You made me smile. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I gotta say....very unique....I seriously doubt one like this has been written before. yeah, kinda like a fly buzzing around pestering the reader.... |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I got him, btw. Heehee. |
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