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0 posted 2003-01-01 10:16 PM


I have a good friend
who has become quite dear
Trying to help everyone
his heart shows very clear
Always quick to reply
to all of his dear friends
His loving words of others poetry
go to all without ends
Writing poetry about his life
he tells us of his joy
About trying all his life
to be a real good boy
Then one fine day
on the great big internet
He found a dream girl
fell in love with no regret
He's told us of their love
of how they laugh and play
And of how his love for her
has grown more and more each day

Then when I came back earlier
to these pages of blue
I read a poem of his
that shocked me, I tell you
He told us in his poem
of his heart's heartbreak
As I read I felt his pain
the pain of his heart-ache
He said he thinks his love
has completely ended
Oh how I hope and pray
his heartache will be mended

I hate to feel the tears of a heart
filled with so much love
"Please", I pray to God,
"Send help to him from above"

Hang in there, little buddy....we all love you
and will help you get through all this, too



[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-02-2003 02:45 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-01-01 10:25 PM


These are very kind words, Ethel...

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2 posted 2003-01-01 10:33 PM


Thank you, Nan......I know all our hearts are going out to our dear little friend.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

jjote
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3 posted 2003-01-02 06:39 AM


I'm still quite new here, and I woudn't know for whom your poem is written.
Nonetheless, I think you've got great empathy here. A new year brings new promises, so hope his year will be a good one.

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4 posted 2003-01-02 09:27 AM


jjote, thanks for reading and replying. Yes, I do, too.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2003-01-02 10:17 AM


Ethel, very nice and understanding writing. Our hearts and hands reach out to bring comfort.  Darn, hate to see anyone hurting.

Hugs, Marti

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6 posted 2003-01-02 10:21 AM


Yes, me too, Marti. We get to know our friends here on these pages of blue and laugh with them when they're happy and cry with them when they're sad, don't we?

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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7 posted 2003-01-02 10:28 AM


I appreciate the love here, and contribute prayers and hugs to those who need them.
Thanks for bringing the call to arms.
ThisDiamond

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8 posted 2003-01-02 10:33 AM


Thank you, Kathleen. Sometimes an e-mail helps those who are hurting, I think. I know that you do, too.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-01-02 10:40 AM


You've got a kind heart Ethel.  What a good friend you must be.
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10 posted 2003-01-02 10:43 AM


Thank you, Duncan. I appreciate you saying that.
I try to live by the "Golden Rule", though I fail to do so at times.
Thanks again...  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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11 posted 2003-01-05 02:24 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Thank you Ethel, thank you! You truly are a wonderful friend and I'm blessed to have all you Passions friends! I have nothing more to say right now!



Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2003-01-05 02:48 PM


We all love you and appreciate you, sweet Noah......
Always remember that we need each other to help through this life.
You have so many friends here, Noah. You are a very big part
of Passions In Poetry, and a big part of our "Family Of Friends".
                   
~Ethel~  

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13 posted 2003-01-05 02:54 PM


Oh ethel, we couldn't wish for a better friend than you. what you've done here is so special. our prayers are with him. and we all know he's going to be ok, and come out even shinier, with as much love as he posesses and shares, how could he not?

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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14 posted 2003-01-05 02:58 PM


Very nice
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15 posted 2003-01-05 03:04 PM


Gemma, that's so true....somebody like him always comes out on top...  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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16 posted 2003-01-05 03:04 PM


Thank you, Jeff....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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17 posted 2003-01-05 03:33 PM


Ethel, that is so nice of you. I'm sure you made him feel a lot better. Unless I am wrong and it isn't who I think it is. Oh no, my tounge is getting messed up

Never be normal!

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18 posted 2003-01-06 12:01 PM


Liz, I was glad to see you were here. Sorry I didn't see this earlier. Thanks for replying. I hope it did make him feel better......  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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