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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Perhaps having shared too much, or not enough, but feeling withered, I find me, crawling into the emptier spaces looking for the lost of me, begging the wonder… and questioning why it doesn’t come back… is this a fate of any person responsible? Here sits this tome, pages upon pages, now gathering dust, like a friend, I wonder, will I break a promise to myself? Oh, Poet! Oh, Writer! O, promisor…. on this, the first day, of the lean of your writes… give credence to breath. Walk away and rejuvenate! See the sun Rise… Feel the sun Set… Immerse the wind Float upon waters… Touch the moon Implode the stars Read others, bleeding solace, pain, or joy, mayhap grief… given remorse, sans life… and know. Just know. For whom do I write this very missive…? For all that suffer the unspoken… and seek a truth… Perhaps for you. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
looking for the lost of me, begging the wonder… and questioning why it doesn’t come back… is this a fate of any person responsible? Perhaps...for inspiration? Glad I stayed awake for this (a nap is lookin' so good!) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling here, for my friend may I say.... you have done it, again... Very well done sunshiney one..... |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is awesome. My perspective of me is different, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
We all face this from time to time, and I appreciate the share of a map to climb out. Liked this very much. TD |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Take a break to soothe the ache. ~ The soul lies buried in the ink that does not flow ~  [This message has been edited by Mysteria (01-01-2003 06:50 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Perhaps having shared too much, or not enough, but feeling withered, I find me, crawling into the emptier spaces looking for the lost of me, begging the wonder… and questioning why it doesn’t come back…" ============================================= Yes...perhaps there are others of us out here who know this feeling well. Rest up dear poetess...but remember to smile. ~Hugs & Love on this first new day!~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lovely - A change of scenery is good for all on occasion... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, yes, perhaps there ARE others you've written this for......perhaps ME? "Love makes the world go around" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And perhaps we have all been here in this place called "STUCK".... Perhaps... What am I telling you this for, for you are writing fine....I suspect that there are other writings that may be suffering as well...i.e. prose... Yeah, I agree with TD...a map perhaps? |
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Diane Coway Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 61USA |
'but feeling withered' I know this feeling. Have a great year!!!!! Perhaps it was for me you wrote this.... Hugs, Red |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Where you wander in mind or place, you take your pen made of thought, think ink yes..for you and yes, for me.  |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
This is so powerful! Not perhaps, I for one, DEFINITELY appreciate your writing ever so much!! angsana |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Perhaps~ is a word I adore. It doesn't lend promise, just hope, and simple gesture of maybe, yes, maybe no, but perhaps, if all is right...In an unsure world you lend you, and you are right up there with the best. Sincerely, Reg |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Sounds like a nice resolution...looking and feeling for ordinary things from a first time point of view. Nicely done Sunshine! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
WELL I didn't mean really just ordinary things, but things we take for granted. The beauty we can see everyday if we just look for it. Thought I had better clear that up.  me again rereading u. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
wow, I really like this ..perhaps..no, for sure(!) the writing has been worth it  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
for me...maybe... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I'd go and check my mirror... but when I did that back in 2000 I discovered my face was missing and someone else appeared there in my stead. I'd like to know where exactly my face went but I haven't the time to look and who knows what I might look like now... hay there girl, hope all is well with you and yours. love and prayers Dale & Rosemary Speaking of ghosts, and after such an eternity. . .wouldn't you know, here comes mine again... ~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~ [This message has been edited by lucky (01-03-2003 04:26 PM).] |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I love this, Sunshine! Perhaps this is for ME! Sunkissed. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Perhaps...and why not? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
perhaps for me too, it certainly felt like it. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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