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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-01-01 01:13 PM




Your Time Has Come

You are no longer merely just a child
growing into a man, your time has come,
and there will be many battles to fight
to lose is fate, but you will win some.

There will be those times endured in your life
when in seas of emotion you would drown,
but the strength you hold inside your heart
will give you courage to get past the downs.

Each day will bring forth a new beginning
held within your tomorrows, you are bound.
While searching to find your own destiny
travel unknown roads, your path will be found.

The journey into life, it has begun
and now you must embark upon its course.
Carry those things you hold closely inside
let the light within be your guiding source.


© dmsmith 01-01-2003



{Happy Birthday Scott, with love and best wishes for the New Year and your future}



I could have missed the pain, but I would have had to miss the dance~ Garth

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-01-2003 01:19 PM).]

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SPIRIT
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1 posted 2003-01-01 03:05 PM


Beautiful!
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2 posted 2003-01-01 03:14 PM


Yes Donna...very very beautiful!!
~Hugs and a Happy New Year dear poetess~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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3 posted 2003-01-01 03:14 PM


Yes, Donna...this is beautiful and has such a loving and caring feel about it. I'm sure Scott will love it, too....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2003-01-01 03:19 PM


Thank you all.  This was my first write of the New Year and has been gifted to my nephew Scott......a very special young man with a bright future ahead of him.......
sorry.....my pride is glowing again!  

Happy New Year to all and thank you for reading.

Scottie, happy birthday.  Luv you much....

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5 posted 2003-01-01 05:27 PM


Donna...a beautiful birthday message...Happy Birthday, Scott!
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6 posted 2003-01-01 05:31 PM



Donna,

This is so touching. I especially like the last line. Though much older than Scott, I'd  like to send this to my son, if I may?  


Warm regards, Pat

  

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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7 posted 2003-01-01 05:50 PM


You write with so much pride and joy!
Coming of age comes only once and from
there on out it is up to us to ultimately
create our own happiness.

You glow Donna~  

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8 posted 2003-01-01 06:09 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yay, I love it, we all wish Scott a very happy birthday as his light is destined to shine always! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2003-01-01 06:26 PM



A very Happy Birthday, Scott!

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10 posted 2003-01-01 06:55 PM


Happy Birthday Scott, you sure have a special Mom that gave you your very own home-made card that I know you will treasure in years to come.  My son has all of his, and I keep his as well.  To your birthday, a New Year, and better days for us all.
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11 posted 2003-01-01 07:39 PM


enjoyed
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