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Siofra
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0 posted 2003-01-01 02:10 AM


This is for my Moonlight Romeo



Just in case the whisper didn't reach your ears tonight
in case you didn't get the kiss
that was suppose to wrap around your evening.
In case you didn't know.
I love you.
Happy Anniversary
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It was late New Years Eve
and you topped my heart with a smile
by tipping the hat of your friendship.
We danced and lingered for hours
just drifting in mischief and disbelief.
We, the drink of choice
for hungry eyes and lonely hearts
broke through the haze of boredom
and cornered ourselves a bit of hope.
So smiling followed where we went
as we spiced the night
with friends as strangers.
We didn't know fate
had made our resolutions for us.
Your voice filled my head
and I was lost in the step
of the twirl you made me dizzy with
as you spun the threads of your heart
around the comfort of my dreaming soul.
Since then I have searched for worthy words
and failed to find that single breath
to say how much I thank you for taking my hand.
It was late New Years Eve
and you tipped your hat
to the top of my dreams
secluding me in your arms
as midnight seized our kiss in its folding embrace.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

[This message has been edited by Siofra (01-01-2003 02:10 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-01-01 02:14 AM


A new year, with new promises.

Thanks for writing this. I love these little peeks.

Mike

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2 posted 2003-01-01 02:48 AM


What a beautiful love story, friend. Just simply beautiful. And you wrote of it so well. Thanks for sharing the happiness of your heart.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-01 03:09 AM


very happy write. makes me smile
Moonlight Romeo
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4 posted 2003-01-02 08:46 AM


I did hear your whisper my love, my own.  

Your kiss, however, is always on my mind; and I did miss your arms.

Happy Anniversary my Darling, we will always be.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Nan
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5 posted 2003-01-02 09:01 AM


Methinks there's a romantic amongst us

Happy New Year, Siofra

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-01-02 09:07 AM


Siofra
Lovely write. Enjoyed

ethome
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7 posted 2003-01-02 09:22 AM


Beautiful love story.
So well written....really a clever write and an enjoyable read....nice way with words!

This is great stuff...
"as you spun the threads of your heart
around the comfort of my dreaming soul."

I likes it because it sings!

[This message has been edited by ethome (01-02-2003 09:23 AM).]

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8 posted 2003-01-02 11:08 AM


How really really beautiful! Congratulations to both of you, you are poetry and true love entertwined.

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