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Open Poetry #24

Secrets

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

0 posted 2003-01-01 12:37 PM

SECRETS

There are secrets
From before the womb.
Locked behind doors
That are hung heavy
From a life, or lives
I cannot and do not
Understand.
The key eludes me,
This is such a hindrance
In unlocking
The unseen confidences
Of my past.
I need this capability,
To understand the present,
To discover my where,
My why,
My reason for being.
To render me fearless
With the onset of my future,
My rebirth,
The entering of the womb.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-01-01 12:59 PM

Very nicely done Spirit and welcome to PiP,
I know it is a belated greeting, but...
so be it..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-01-01 03:12 AM

whew! Hard on the eyes...but good write

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-01-01 07:56 PM

Thank you. I appreciate all your comments.

My perspective of me is different,
As I look out from within,
Than that of others on the outside,
Trying to look in. ©spirit

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