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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-12-31 05:46 PM


~Friendship can't be forced~

Without a familiar tone of voice
and the lack of expression in ones eyes
do we lose the truer meaning
that supports genuine friendships
in a virtual world
opposed to the real world
tell me it isn't so~

Where do we draw the line
are we not one in the same circular motion
dare we pretend to be something we're not
I ask you, are we creating fantasies
to act on and believe in~

Are we split down the middle
given to multiple personalities
seeking instant gratification
searching for our soul
as if it were possible to conjure up on a whim
and run with it,  to where~

We can only be the best that we can be
like it or not, it's up to each and every one of us
nobody walks in our shoes
I for one have too many to count
and you wouldn't want to try them on for size,
don't ask~

But I would give to you my last penny for your thoughts
a little something to remember me by
I've no fantasies to live out
no illusions of love,
what will be, will surely be~

Even though my world is not always a pretty one
it is what it is and I am who I am,
and to you all I extend my hand
take if you will
or walk on by and let it go~

~~*~~


~Inspiration comes in all forms and when I least expect it~
~Thanks to you~    


May your poetic pen provide you with an abundance of inspiration
and may you march to your own drum
and find your peace in it's continuous rhythm.

Happy New Year to all~




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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2002-12-31 05:48 PM



HUgsssssss you.....HAPPY NEW YEAR

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2002-12-31 05:56 PM


Aww Lauren thank you~
Love and hugs across the miles~

(now I'm going to do a quick edit job,
it's my signature you know)  

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-12-31 06:19 PM


Hi Lori.....Here's my hand extended back to you.
I understand this, because "I am who I am" too.
That's the best way, don't you thing?

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2002-12-31 06:48 PM


Thanks Ethel...swinging your hand in mine and smiling bright.  

Being myself is the only way I know how to be...but that doesn't mean everyone agrees~

Hugging you~

EagleOne
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5 posted 2002-12-31 08:46 PM


I very much enjoyed your thoughts, thank you!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2002-12-31 10:50 PM


Thank you for reading and enjoying my  poetry Eagle one...
your kind words are a gift in return.  

wranx
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7 posted 2003-01-01 12:33 PM


Yes, exactly so.

Or so I believe.

Ed

Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2003-01-01 12:55 PM


Loved this piece Lori.
"Even though my world is not always a pretty one
it is what it is and I am who I am,
and to you all I extend my hand
take if you will
or walk on by and let it go~"
Exactly.


passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-01-01 03:08 AM


beautiful!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
10 posted 2003-01-01 12:42 PM


I'm glad we're in agreement..
Shake, wranx

And so it goes....
thank you Kacy~

I'm happy to know you thought so.
Thanks Dixie~

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