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Father Don
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since 2002-12-31
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0 posted 2002-12-31 05:14 PM


choke my life
snatch my breath
green with envy
closer to death
he has what i want
ill take what i can
hurts me more
than you can understand

eyes swole shut
from your abuse
lust flows through
ill tie my own noose
ill jump from a cliff
for those brown eyes
noone can help me
my own demise

green with envy
you cant stop now
too far in, too deep down


© Copyright 2002 Eric Dickerson - All Rights Reserved
Diane Coway
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since 2002-08-01
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1 posted 2003-01-01 11:48 AM


Sad post, it is not good envy, but it abounds.
Take heart though for their are a lot of good, loving, caring people still left!!!!
I hope you a peaceful and nice year.
Hugs....

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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2 posted 2003-01-01 11:58 AM


Well-written, but so sad...
I hope you have a very Happy New Year...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

janmew
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since 2001-10-27
Posts 134
Canada
3 posted 2003-01-01 12:09 PM


You've described it very well!  

Jan

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-01-01 12:44 PM


gotta get rid of it quick, that's not a good thing to have inside....there are ways
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