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dreams of you
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dreams of you |
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Father Don New Member
since 2002-12-31
Posts 6GA |
i fell so hard i shook my head is this hell? am i dead? i saw such wonders my eyes wouldnt shut drawn to the beauty of the sweet taste of lust she danced on the fire she laughed and she smiled she gazed in my eyes she burned with desire i reached for her hand she stopped all of time i was jerked to my feet her lips pulled to mine passion and lust explode in my chest came from my lips the sweet morningbreath the same that comes from the cool morning mist that dews from the sky and suddenly quits and as soon as it started it ended as fast i looked all around but true, no love did exist no one was there not a voice in the air just an empty amount of space a hell instead- and suddenly i awoke i snapped all my senses i jumped to the sky and realized what i was missing i gazed at my bed empty instead of what i should have no love to hold my head as i thought about what ive loved and what ive lost so dear i started to cry an angel caught my tear she smiled and it shined through her beautiful blue eyes my angel was you what a wonderful surprise |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello William Welcome to Passions and thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. I really liked this one. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Father Don New Member
since 2002-12-31
Posts 6GA |
call me eric...  |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is an enjoyable piece for sure. I liked it very much. |
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