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My mind is a dam
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My mind is a dam |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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My Mind Is A Dam Here I am looking down at the keyboard poised with my stiff fingers ready to say something but my mind is a huge dam of tangled thoughts so if it breaks maybe then I’ll have something to say and be like a steady stream of rushing water there is something there I can feel it so I’ll wait BloomingRose |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
When my mind is blank....(which is most of the time and it shows here)...I just move from this keyboard to my electronic keyboard piano thinggie.....and it's so awful what comes out...I tend to get the idea that I need to stick to this keyboard...and it's usually pretty awful too isn't it. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Usually, I write it before I sit in front of the keyboard. Usually, I write it 20 or 30 times before I sit in front of the keyboard, actually. But I'm known for oddity. I understand what you say here. Sometimes you don't have the least notion what to write. But I don't think you have too much of a problem, judging from this inspired poem. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A feeling I know well, well said! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Oh I know this feeling! Not just the inability to write anything, the frustrating writer's block ... but the actual itching to be writing, wanting to do it, but the muse holds back. Lovely write! Jan |
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