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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-12-31 02:40 PM



There’s More

Some live
in constant awareness
that the sun will rise
that the moon will shine
and nothing will change
until you die.

How strange
to think some hope for nothing more
than to live to be old
and to die with lovely flowers.

I’d rather live
in constant awareness
that there’s more than a final sunset
for I’ve seen the rainbow
and the goal
is more precious
than gold


BloomingRose

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (12-31-2002 03:28 PM).]

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-12-31 02:48 PM


How very beautiful and oh so true sweet Deb!
Lovely write...Happy New Year to you and yours!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2002-12-31 03:16 PM


you've discovered the secret at the end of the rainbow
so lovely Deb...Happy New Year to you!!

Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past?
With this crutch, its old age and wisdom, it whispers no ... this will be the last.

jh

Sandpiper
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3 posted 2003-01-01 08:50 AM


"I’d rather live
in constant awareness
that there’s more than a final sunset
for I’ve seen the rainbow
and the goal
is more precious
than gold"

AMEN!!!  Happy New Year!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-01 09:22 AM


I enjoyed reading....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

regards2you
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5 posted 2003-01-01 10:10 AM




I love this. It is so special and quite wise. Thank you.


Hugs and warm regards, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-01-01 10:13 AM


BloomingRose
I agree, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-01-01 12:57 PM


wonderful! wise words!
BloomingRose
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8 posted 2003-01-01 05:08 PM


Thank you. Hope is worth the wait.

Hugs,
Deb

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-01-05 03:20 AM


Glad that there is more...James
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