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Open Poetry #24

Addiction

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2002-12-31 02:38 PM

Addiction

I need your presence
I seek your smell
I am addicted; I need to inhale

The sleekness of your shaft
The burning at the tip
I am addicted; I need you against my lip

One day my love for you will surely kill me
I so wish we had never met
But until then, pass me another cigarette

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

1 posted 2002-12-31 02:44 PM

I know exactly how ya feel...I'm gonna go enter "Re-tox" as soon as I get off work...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2002-12-31 03:43 PM

I like this very much, Susan. *S* Welcome to Passions! *S*

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-12-31 04:04 PM

hard habit to break...youve written the need well.
Welcome to Poetry Land Susan, nice to meet you. Happy New Year
peace and poetry
jm

Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past?
With this crutch, its old age and wisdom, it whispers no ... this will be the last.

jh

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

4 posted 2002-12-31 04:05 PM

This is very good. I don't smoke, nor do my siblings but our parents did. My Dad used to say he'd go out with a cigarette in his mouth and a beer in one hand and a 'bird' in the other. He pretty much did just that.

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