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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-12-31 10:52 AM



empty pages turning
as I press a pretend rose
the one never given between

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-12-31 10:57 AM


Fragile petals crumble
glassine dreams
preserved only
in memory


Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
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2 posted 2002-12-31 11:48 AM


Hint of fragrance fades,
breeze through the open window,
scatters dead petals.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
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3 posted 2002-12-31 12:00 PM



for my survival sake......

Album of wishes,
Photograph in mind's eye,
Ever, precious hope.

or...

Album of future.
Wonder the spectacular,
Gift from God above.

Not trying to get you to change your mind, for we agree, we are where we are...only to say....you never know what tomorrow holds....

Hugs, Pat  



..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (12-31-2002 12:01 PM).]

Salty
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 669
Texas
4 posted 2002-12-31 12:34 PM


wow...a whole picture album of memories...in this short verse. Very very well done girl.
~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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