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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-12-30 10:52 PM

Sleep is but steps away. Yet, though the tired limbs
are heavy, laden with the day’s burden....a heart beats
ever strong within. The wrought iron gate closes
slowly....effortlessly on hinges of a dreamer’s silk.

Each blink a step toward, each yawn a leap..
Jumping the chasm of nightmares, landing
effortlessly in a bed of woven dreams, stirring
slightly to the breeze among the moonbeams,
as crickets chorus and lightning bugs flit too
and fro in endless blink...

Lying back upon the feathers, eyes closed
as darkness comes....and dreams rally
around the Oak headboard, waiting to
hear the last sigh...before love walks
through the curtain of my mind...

Pleasant Dreams...

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-12-30 10:59 PM

"before love walks
through the curtain of my mind.."

this is very soothing.. and feels that one awaits very expectantly for sleep, to dream of love...mmmmm.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-12-30 10:59 PM

Ahhh Dear Magnus - this is the perfect poem to read just before I slip under the sheets. Pleasant dreams to you as well. sleepy hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-12-31 01:22 AM

*yawning*

yep, I can feel it now

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2002-12-31 02:36 AM

Still suffering but you give an insomniac such wonderful hopes

visitvenus
Member

since 2002-12-30

Posts 101
PA, USA

5 posted 2002-12-31 03:15 AM

Ditto......

What Aenimal said.

*yawn (And I mean that in a good way!)

[This message has been edited by visitvenus (12-31-2002 03:15 AM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-12-31 11:55 PM

An ethereal feel, an endless timeless vision. Beautiful. ThisDiamond

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-01-01 03:17 AM

So beautiful, Barry. Aren't dreams of love really something.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2003-01-01 05:51 PM

Barry,

What a wonderful mind it is!

I like:

..."stirring slightly to the breeze among the moon beams..."

very nice... enjoyed this greatly.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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