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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-12-30 08:01 PM


//hello, this christmas I feel blues too...but writing them out does help a lot... I hope you enjoy my little poems for all of those who have blues christmas...

Ivory Paper

Some people say day raining shower
Is a blessing...
To me
It hides my running tears...
Broken out salt of my heart.

Some people say night moonlight
Is gorgeous...
To me
It reflects my only shadow...
Poisoning...my heart each day deeper...

Then I...
Come across my table-
Sit alone with a ivory paper, which
Has tip-toe to my desk to console
My thoughts and devastating.

My ink spill on the paper,
While I seek for someone to be near,
Echoing the same sentiments...
I need not a pity, nor advice,
All I ever need is an attentive ear,
Sitting through the night
When my heart feels sore...

I decide to write to my dear Dairy:
Dear Jesus...
Today I feel sad...
I know you hear me... and you always has patience.
So now I will burn all my words to ashes...
Leaving them behind...
In knowing...You must have Your plan for me...

Maybe I am not praying...but I know...
You are always listening...to my soul...

(c)Dec 30, 2002
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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1 posted 2002-12-30 08:18 PM


Yes He is always listening...
Write it out sweetie...it does help.
I've had one of those Christmases as well.
~Hugs & a Happy New Year~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2002-12-31 01:19 AM


that would be me!

great write!

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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3 posted 2002-12-31 02:57 PM


=) glad the two of you like it.

~Lots of Hugs and Happy New Year!~

*Kiss on the cheek*

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

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