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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-12-30 05:45 PM

With lack of color
I've painted this
hoping perhaps
that you won't miss,
the time I spent
the thought I give
I pray you'll see
for me to live,
the color glows
the color fades.

I've had yellow
sun filled days
as well as gray
overcast of sky
moonless nights
  in black have I,
seen and touched
  felt with sense,
but now what is
  in my past tense,
is dull of wit
  blind of bright,
I left these two
  in dark of night.

As I continued on you see.

The rainbow man, the words, and me.

WhiteRose 12/30/02

"my reflection becomes me"

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (12-30-2002 09:26 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

1 posted 2002-12-30 07:25 PM

WhiteRose - dear poetess - I love the flow of this write & am going back to read it again. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

2 posted 2002-12-31 09:05 PM

Enjoyed!

Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

3 posted 2003-01-01 09:38 AM

"but now what is
  in my past tense,
is dull of wit
  blind of bright,
I left these two
  in dark of night."

WOW!!  Happy New Year!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-01-01 09:51 AM

I love your poetry. Anne. thanks for sharing it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

5 posted 2003-01-01 12:58 PM

lack of color? YOU?

I think not!

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