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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2002-12-30 03:59 PM

You tell me more than any sane mind can handle.
your truths are far from exotic lies.
sometimes feeling cloudy,
i wish you would spin them,
as a change from the flurry of you.

I take my time,
And lower into the confessions,
proclamations, and statements.
Dipping my toes into our past,
it burns,
and you stop the tap.

Immersed before,
I'd been scolded by the worry,
inadequacy and comparison.
A wonderful man washes over me.
In your truths,
I become alive,
in past and future.
Keep teaching me,
The almost unbearable truth.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-12-30 04:20 PM

This is excellent. Bravo. ThisDiamond

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-12-30 04:35 PM

Nicely done.. it is indeed ( as I remember) almost unbearable...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2002-12-30 04:47 PM

Gemma this is absolutely beautiful, thanks

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-12-30 04:51 PM

Honesty...such a fragile commodity...
it would be good to give it
the respect it
deserves...

Very good read, gemjop. Thank you!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-12-30 11:28 PM

Very nice...James

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

6 posted 2003-01-15 10:53 PM

Fantastic writing...
Smiles2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-01-15 11:03 PM

(sigh) Yes, yes, honesty is the core of all that is and what makes everything possible and stabilized! (big hugggssssss) Always believe in the truth, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-01-16 02:18 AM

"You tell me more than any sane mind can handle."
Understood this line quite well.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-01-16 04:42 AM

this is just what I believe in...and always try to put out.

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

10 posted 2003-01-16 08:14 AM

..gemjop../\..very calming; i enjoyed reading..

../\..Spiros

---------calm seas--------

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