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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-12-30 12:44 PM


Sometimes
when things are weighing
heavy on my mind
it is then that I turn to you,
because there truly are those times
when I no longer know what to do.

Sometimes
my mind feels so jumbled
and there is so much inside
to share
again I come    to you
with all of my doubts
and fears       to bare.

Sometimes
you sit quietly    listening
with patience
you try to understand,
when the tears
are rolling down my face
your always there
to hold my hand.

Sometimes
when  the darkness
would   consume me
you are the light
that's helping me
to mend,
for you are
more than just     the sometimes;
in you I have found
my forever
friend.


I know that you can 'read' me
but can you  'hear'  "me"?


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-30-2002 01:26 PM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-12-30 12:45 PM


so nice to have that special forever friend...nice write Donna. Made me smile today.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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2 posted 2002-12-30 12:49 PM


Donna, this is so special and touching. We all need a forever friend that we can depend on and lean on; no matter the circumstances.

Hugs and Happy New Year, Marti


regards2you
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3 posted 2002-12-30 01:03 PM



Very well said. Everyone needs at least one. Enjoyed.


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2002-12-30 01:28 PM


Thanks everyone.  Whats nice to realize is that if we take the time to look deep enough, we all have a forever friend,
in ourselves.  
Hugs all.

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just out of reach
5 posted 2002-12-30 03:06 PM


Donna - soft and lovely - enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2002-12-30 03:32 PM


very nice Donna,
I get tired of talking to myself though, would be nice to have that comfort of another just in  case myself decided to disagree with me.
hugssss
M

gemjop
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7 posted 2002-12-30 04:07 PM


lovely donna. what peole forget is, we often know ourselves better than anybody. though we need the help of loved ones, the key is to help yourself. very much enjoyed.
lots of love gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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8 posted 2002-12-30 04:15 PM


Such a loving poem, Donna. Yes, I agree that we need to be our own friend, too....
As I always say, how can we love others if we don't love ourselves?  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2002-12-30 05:51 PM


Don't we all want a friend like that, Donna.  This is such a heartfelt tribute.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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10 posted 2002-12-30 09:26 PM


This is beautiful. And we do all need a friend in ourselves. Hard to find sometimes, though.
Happy New YEar
Sandra

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2002-12-31 05:39 AM


I wanted to pop in quickly and thank everyone.  Things are extremely busy for me at the moment with year end responsibilities at work which highly limits my time right now to be here.  
Friendship comes in many forms, be it that you are friends with yourself, if you have someone special who you can call a friend in every meaning of the word, or even if your best friend is whatever God or Spirit you might have in your life......
but I truly believe that if we care for ourselves enough, we are never alone....
enough rambling already!  
May all of your New years be blessed with many friends, and much laughter and love. Hugs to all!

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