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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-12-30 12:31 PM


Designed Intent

Maybe, I only loved his words,
those ones I read "the in between"
Maybe, I have grown away
not feeling it, what use to mean

Perhaps it is a wayward thought
induced to end, a dream I bought

Or maybe it's somewhere inside,
the lack of it, the less to hide

For now I sit in loneliness
the more of not, obsessing less

And end I must, the feel of this
the last of words, his touch of kiss

I never wanted the "in between"
that always hid, to me, unseen.

Maybe, perhaps I've grown away
the feeling gone, the meaning blurred.
Maybe, I only loved his words,
intent designed; between, unheard.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-30-2002 12:33 PM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2002-12-30 12:34 PM


I love his silence

and it's been long past time to end.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-12-30 02:54 PM


I live in silence, sometimes a sound or two is welcome

M

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2002-12-30 09:32 PM


Damn, that is one powerful poem. And the way you designed the words..awesome.
Sandra

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-12-30 09:40 PM


You always "design your words"  excellently...this was no exception......  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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