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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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0 posted 2002-12-30 10:52 AM



HERO

I could say:

How much I admire you,
Embarrassed,
You would
Shrug it off,
Not because you don’t care,
But because
You do.

I could say:

How much I applaud you
For the way
You conduct
Your life.
That you have
A dignity
That is laudable,
It would bewilder you,
Such observations.

Maybe, I should tell you:

How I envy you
Your strength and courage
Your beauty
But would you believe me?
Especially as you
Are unwilling
To recognize
Your own assets.
Perhaps, maybe,
You would believe me

When I say:

How proud I am
Of your ability
To face the enemy,
To stand your ground,
To fight.
Unlike myself,
Who would but
Play ostrich
To avoid confrontation.
There again, maybe,

I should acknowledge:

Just how much
I sincerely
Do love you.
What a blessing
You are to me,
Pure and simple.
That God knew,
How much
I would need
Heroes in my life,
So He gave me you.


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-30 12:03 PM


How very beautiful. Welcome, to a place where you can still find, enjoy, and cherish the company of a hero now and then.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-02-02 09:37 AM



We never do know where
our heroes will come from...
but yes,
there are still some out there...

Nan
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3 posted 2003-02-02 09:49 AM


This is a wondrous tribute... A hero is a hero, whether it be a personal or a renowned one... Nicely written, SPIRIT...
vlraynes
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4 posted 2003-02-03 08:59 PM



SPIRIT~
What a gorgeous and loving tribute this is.
Beautifully expressed.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
5 posted 2003-02-03 10:18 PM


Thank you for the nice words - appreciated.
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