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Hear My Cry (forgive me?)
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Hear My Cry (forgive me?) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Hear my cry o darkened night give me taste of understanding Tell me why o sweet white knight I feel the glove of reprimanding? Shall I quiver? Shall I beg? Whisper you, dream sweet to bed? My dreams are but a sea of sand My heart, the stranger in strange land. Tell me how to make it right. Tell me, I might sleep tonight. * * * An apology to a friend. Sometimes I just behave very badly. I'm sorry. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You have the most poetic way of asking for forgiveness. How could anyone say 'no' to you? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well, ya didn't do anything to ME that requires apology. (unless, it's that whole "Yeti" thing) But I'm sure that the aggreived is relieved. Hey witch, I just haven't been online much. ~yeti |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am relieved too.  Now maybe I can sleep. Thanks, Ed. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Shall I quiver? Shall I beg? Whisper you, dream sweet to bed? My dreams are but a sea of sand My heart, the stranger in strange land. Ya know Sen, my middle name is legally...'I'm sorry'.  But as much practice as I've had, could never say it like this. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
iam relieved too  enjoy your read |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling now... sometimes I think folks forgive me out of self defense.  I can be a real pest. Thanks all, and I'll take this opportunity to apologize to ANYBODY I have ever offended, ANYTIME, ANYWHERE. sheesh. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Perfect, You are now free to sleep, perhaps to dream. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
If guilt makes you right great apologies like this than I don't forgive you, even though you've never done anything to me! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the hard thing is when they say there is no making it right. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling again finally? And Dixie? grinning now. That is when the nude tap dancing starts!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I use to have Duncan's other name. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
K, I STILL have Duncan's middle name..... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This might be bloody inappropriate ... but you make supplication sexy. |
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