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When Dreaming Has Ended
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When Dreaming Has Ended |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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When the dreaming has ended and the time has no tock, decisions come hardest with no ticking of clock. I am chased by what haunts me and the click of my past, but the present of future brings me down by its cast. Oh, those shadows are merely my sighs taking shape, as I cover the distance with words of escape. I am narrowly with you, but the ending is near, as my dreaming dissolves into nothingness, clear. Was it worth all the hardness, my clock's stuck on one? My timing was off by the seconds, undone. You can tell, I can feel it, the dreaming's at end, no more you-thoughts to spirit, no more wantings need tend. For I'm over it all, let down by the glass, its framing of me, and time tarnished in brass. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-30-2002 08:14 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Oh, those shadows are merely my sighs taking shape" A rather lonely and sad bit of verse, but the above lines are my favorite. You should see what some of my sighs look like.  Hope things are well for you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
its framing of me, and time tarnished in brass. yeah... understand |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hey C, if you can understand, maybe you can explain it to me...I think my insides know it but the rest of me is puzzled Serenity, I am as well as I can be at the moment...I sigh so much I hyperventilate until I am dizzy (sometimes a good thing and most times bad)  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ethel...my friends cute cat is named Ethel...sweetest thing M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Maureen How nice to see you again. This was so beautiful yet so very sad. I wish you much love and happiness in the New Year. Here is a little something for you (not written by me) : When the willow bends at the first hint of troubled breezes, our friends come running to see how they can help. Sometimes friends know when they are needed even before we realise it ourselves, because we are accustomed to letting them in on the happenings of our lives Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen, I know this feeling. This has a lot of sorrow for the end of a dream. I sometimes wonder if the dreams are worth it anymore. But still we try, hm? Happy New Year Sandra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"For I'm over it all, let down by the glass, its framing of me, and time tarnished in brass." I absolutely love those lines. Happy New Year |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"I am narrowly with you, but the ending is near, as my dreaming dissolves into nothingness, clear" Excellent!! Happy New Year! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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