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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-12-30 07:36 AM


Accommodations

The colored hues change each day
In my thoughts that fly away
The ones that are a fantasy
Made from mortars reality.

Each sandcastle ebbs the tide
I cannot stop the dreams subside.
All I can is to renew
Each fantasy for review

And this I do with added zest
With larger reams and dreamers best.
And as the sands count out the cost
I shed a tear for all that’s lost.

It is the kingdom that I reign
The equal time to sooth my vain
They are the dreams that activate
It is a world I do relate.

So if you plan to visit soon
Just let me know, I’ll add a room.


© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-12-30 07:40 AM


Put on some coffee too?

smile...and a morning hug.

As you've prob'ly heard, I love it there inside your head.

And geez, I wish you could see what I see right now. A gorgeous sunrise that has the sky in stripes of pink, cobalt blue, and aqua. It even makes the suburbs look good.



Love ya, sy!

Toerag
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Ala bam a
2 posted 2002-12-30 08:06 AM


"I'll add a room"....(and keep a light on for ya)....
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-12-30 08:24 AM


serenity,
Now that's what I call a setup.

Toe,
It would be my pleasure.LOL

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-12-30 08:47 AM



You better be tapping those nails soon, Sy...
with an invitation like that, your halls
will soon fill up!

If I miss you tomorrow, Happy New Year!


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-30-2002 08:49 AM).]

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-12-30 09:29 AM


May I have a room with a view please Sy?!
Boy, you're going to have a full house!
Love ya sweetie!
More tea?
~Morning hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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6 posted 2002-12-30 09:48 AM




Sy,

Have to agree with everyone. You'll have a full house. Enjoyed this a great deal.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

GG
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Lost in thought
7 posted 2002-12-30 10:06 AM


loved This!
I'd like to come too.. can I have a room with a balcony, please, kind sir?

great write!
Have a good new year.
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-12-30 11:02 AM


Sunshine
Happy New Year and thank you love.

Enchantress
Hugs and tea, all for me. You room awaits.

Pat,
Thank you and have a happy.

Alyssa,
One room with a balcony coming up. Happy New Year.

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2002-12-30 04:30 PM


if you knew I was comming would ya bake a cake *L*

Im on me mothy way...bringing Randy treats and raspberry tea..turn on the tinkerbell landing lights..Im flying blind with me winkies on. LOL

Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past?
With this crutch, its old age and wisdom, it whispers no ... this will be the last.

jh

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-12-30 05:07 PM


JM,
How about some twinkies with the winkies?
May all your family and yourself have a wonderful New Year. See you next Year.
WWRS

Nightshade
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just out of reach
11 posted 2002-12-30 05:23 PM


Seymour....oh dear...I am so late in reading and signing to-day that there probably won't be any room left for me. I know!!
I can bunk with my sister Enchantress!! Can I? Huh? Pleaaaaaaaase. Then you can read to us and we can have hot chocolate and cookies.....and stay up all night and....oops. I'll be good I promise.
Thankyou for another charming read. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

garysgirl
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12 posted 2002-12-30 05:32 PM


Me too...pleeeeeeeeaseee????


  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2002-12-30 06:49 PM


are u sure you want to extend such an invitation, you know how hard it is to get rid of company, at this time of the year, in particular, living in the sunshine state,
life is a beach, isnt it?
enjoyed this

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
14 posted 2002-12-30 07:03 PM


Seymour I really enjoyed this. Be wary as you can see there are many who would take up your offer, you'll have to build a new wing
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2002-12-30 07:22 PM


Chris,
You can have all of that and more.

garysgirl
I would never leave you out.

inkedgoddess
Yes, life is a beach, LOL

Aenimal
I think you are right I'll have to build a wing not a room.

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