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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-30 01:19 AM


What I've become
evolution or death
Conformity has never been
an option
Ideals a
fickle indulgence
Each wake a struggle
or challenge
of and with
so called authorities
The cold hard truth
of logic or mysticism
But there are
moments
in weakness
Tired
of standing
alone
That I've wished
I could
believe in
something
or
someone

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-30-2002 01:58 AM).]

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Krawdad
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1 posted 2002-12-30 01:25 AM


Tempting, isn't it?
Mysteria
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2 posted 2002-12-30 01:28 AM


Very tempting!  I feel the same now and again myself.
Aenimal
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3 posted 2002-12-30 01:30 AM


Krawdad...Maddeningly so at times...  resist or succumb

Thanks Mysteria not an easy choice

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-30-2002 01:32 AM).]

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2002-12-30 01:40 AM


It's a lot of work but I know I have to believe in myself before anyone else does.

There's always a catch!!  

Enjoyed your poem Raph~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2002-12-30 01:44 AM


Conformity has never been
an option
*************************
I'm glad you aren't a plastic cookie cutter.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
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the ass-end of space
6 posted 2002-12-30 01:53 AM


Thanks blues, believing in yourself is only one step and always the hardest

Kacy no not a plastic cookie cutter, more like a chainsaw lol


passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2002-12-30 01:54 AM


me too
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
8 posted 2002-12-30 07:07 AM


from the inside out, honest,
but dont be so jaded, youre too young,
let something/someone/catch u sometimes

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
9 posted 2002-12-30 01:12 PM


Dixie not fun is it?

Inked what is too young? You're never too young be jaded in this world

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA
10 posted 2002-12-30 05:11 PM


i believe something, i believe that you will never willingly let conformity be the option. and this makes me smile. you're strength of character is shown in such a lot of your work raph. i like the reality in your words.
lots of love, gemma xxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

garysgirl
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11 posted 2002-12-30 05:55 PM


Raph, I can always feel your heart in whatever subject you choose to write about. I like that very much. You are so REAL, friend...a very good trait, I might add.....Thank you for being you.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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12 posted 2002-12-30 06:54 PM


Gemma you just made my day week month year!!!
Thanks

Ethel and a thanks for being you REAL and SWEET and THOUGHTFUL etc...

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