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darkling
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since 2001-08-28
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0 posted 2002-12-30 12:10 PM



a dress, a bauble,
a rusty mouse trap.
A dusty old volume
you close with a snap.

A shoe, a hat
and broken toys.
dirty old objects
long gone joys.

The lightswitch is turned
off with a click
and once more there is silence
in the well loved attic.


NOTE: this is a poetic reminder to look things up in the archives, you never know what you might find in the dusty 'attics' of piptalk. Go on, give a try, you know you want to.

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neveah5
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1 posted 2002-12-30 12:54 PM


good idea
BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-12-30 02:19 AM


Smiling at the thought of rifling through the attic....nice little treasure you came up with darkling!
passing shadows
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3 posted 2002-12-30 02:20 AM


I've always been one to go back in the archives, searching, rustling through...and always delighted!
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4 posted 2002-12-30 06:53 AM



It's nice seeing that others recognize the treasures that wait in store...in the archives!

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5 posted 2002-12-30 01:22 PM


There sure are some wonderful poems in there and thank you for reminding folks in such a lovely poetic way.

May a handshake, smile, kiss or a hug be the best present you give or receive this year.

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