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Eloise
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0 posted 2002-12-29 11:07 PM


Treasured memories of childhood days
Warms this old heart in so many ways.
I can hear the sounds of that magical time.
Remembering faces that were left behind.

Kaliedoscopic fragments of where I have been
Encircled by so many long forgotten friends.
I collect and cradle these precious dreams.
Creating a vision like none I've seen.

These sweet thoughts leave me in awe and wonder
As they dissolve into a myriad of color.
Memories so special still held deep within
Have molded me into the person I am.

© Copyright 2002 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-30 01:54 AM


Loved those 'kaleidscope fragments' Well done friend.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2002-12-30 01:55 AM


each memory molds us, yes. I agree. Good write!
Eloise
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3 posted 2002-12-30 08:54 PM


Thank you Midnight Sun and passing shadows for stopping by to read.  I appreciate your comments.
Severn
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4 posted 2002-12-31 05:40 PM


Hey you!

Nice to see you again...how've you been? Very long time no see my friend...was a good surprise to see your name on the boards..

interesting look into your thoughts...

hugs..

K


Denise
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5 posted 2002-12-31 09:10 PM


Eloise! Welcome back! So very good to see you again! Lovely poem too! Have a Happy and Blessed New Year! And don't be a stranger!
janmew
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6 posted 2002-12-31 09:13 PM


Lovely poem, Eloise. I really liked the feel of this, all those memoreis blending in like the colours in the kaliedescope.

Jan

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-12-31 09:13 PM



Eloise!  Welcome home!  Happy New Year, and
thank you for using one of my favorite words!

Eloise
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8 posted 2003-01-01 09:29 PM


Severn, Denise, Jan and Sunshine, thank you all so much and Happy New Years to each of you.  It's good to post again here.  It has been awhile. So many wonderful new poets as well as the cherished old.
LadySofia
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9 posted 2003-01-27 06:24 PM


Sweet, simple, elegant are the words which come to mind after reading this bit of verse. Good job! And so true.
Eloise
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10 posted 2003-01-28 11:59 PM


Thank you so much LadySofia.  I appreciate the read.  
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