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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2002-12-29 10:45 PM




do you dare dive into this ocean ,
of convolution and paradox,
or just watch by its sanded gate,
lured by the rhythm of the waves
that sing their siren song for you,

dare you leave your safe haven now,
and risk a trip through the unknown,
to be swept up in the rollercoaster of
twists and turns
through life,love and madness,
while attempting to tame the ocean,
only to be knocked down again,

have you the heart and guts
to look past her superficial shell
of contradiction and confusion,
and seek the peace of the depths,
the clarity in the unclear,
the beauty in the absurdity,
the madness in the beauty,

can you reach deep enough
to find the center,
to her welcoming and loving heart,
does if feel like home to you too,
would you dare dive in?

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Andrew Scott
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1 posted 2002-12-29 11:51 PM


A fine write with a pondering finish.  I like.  As for diving in... only when the water is warm.  Thanks for sharing.  
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2002-12-30 01:02 AM


have you the heart and guts
to look past her superficial shell
of contradiction and confusion,
and seek the peace of the depths,
the clarity in the unclear,
the beauty in the absurdity,
the madness in the beauty,

I especially liked that verse and the feelings of no fear....

This probably sounds silly but it reminded me of a commercial that goes on to say, "the biggest risk is not taking one"

Loved your poem!!

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2002-12-30 01:14 AM


I think anybody who gets to know you would answer with a resounding yes inked. great words again and again
passing shadows
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4 posted 2002-12-30 02:31 AM


I know about that safe haven, risks are a part of life though.
garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-12-30 03:07 AM


I like your poem and the way you just SAY whatever is on your mind.
That's the way to be, Lady.......  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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6 posted 2002-12-30 09:42 AM




Probably if they are terminally ill.
I love a good fantasy, but why risk losing it?


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

RSWells
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7 posted 2002-12-30 09:46 AM


The most alluring beaches erode in time. Sometimes those fish have large teeth and live beyond their landing. Good fishing to ya.
vandana
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8 posted 2002-12-30 11:01 AM


enjoyed
kayjay
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9 posted 2002-12-30 11:38 AM


Nothing quite tempts me like a bit of risk for a wondrous reward. Nicely written.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

FLOWERGIRL
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the woods of Pa
10 posted 2003-01-05 10:13 PM


A Brooklin Girl! Kool! Yes you can handle anything, your eyes shout it out loud. I love the poem. There is a guy I have given the invitation to dive in and he waits on the sandy shore, so tempted, but glued in that spot. He only knows the surface of what he means to my heart and life. Others see more than he does. Thank you for touching where I have been.


inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
11 posted 2003-01-05 10:16 PM


give him one shot, one little nudge,, if hes not man enuf to take all of you, toss him overboard,theres others more worthy of you,
like your name, i use it too on other places

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