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vandana
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0 posted 2002-12-29 04:42 PM



Guess,
I found myself
Through this misty memories
Yesterday's gone
Yet the love Is strong
Guess
I found myself a way
Through this path
Never knowing
Just to be here with you
Just to be alive again
Just to feel your love
Tonight
Just to hear your voice
Another day
Is passing by
Just to be me here again
Just to be myself again
Found a reason
To my love
Yet
Those memories
Become only my path
To love
Just to be with you
Just to be me again
Feeling lost In a song
Here with your love
Long nights
Misty memories
And to the dawn.....
Just to be me here again

[This message has been edited by vandana (12-29-2002 04:42 PM).]

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sigheyes
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1 posted 2002-12-29 04:43 PM


This flows like a beautiful melody.  Lovely!
neveah5
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2 posted 2002-12-29 04:53 PM


I like this
it seems hopeful

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-12-29 04:58 PM


A beautiful song of love Vandana.  Enjoyed this much.
garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-12-29 07:10 PM


Vandana, I love this. It really is like a love song...very beautiful.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-12-29 07:39 PM


Lovely vandana...James
GG
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6 posted 2002-12-29 09:01 PM


This really is beautiful
flows as a song

keep it up!
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Enchantress
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7 posted 2002-12-29 09:04 PM


Very lovely...much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

darkling
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8 posted 2002-12-29 09:38 PM


mmm. It leaves me satisfied. I love the repetition of the word guess. Guess is an interesting word, provoking thoughts. Very nice read.
Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-12-30 05:25 PM




(smiles) Just let all your dreams and hopes be set free and you will be all you desire, sweet friend, I wish for this love to find your way and for every morning and evening to feel like a fantasy come true! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2002-12-30 05:37 PM


Those memories
Become only my path
To love
Just to be with you
Just to be me again
Feeling lost In a song
Here with your love
Long nights
Misty memories
And to the dawn.....
Just to be me here again
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beautiful poem of longing and heart on sleeve Vandana..just lovely!!

Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past?
With this crutch, its old age and wisdom, it whispers no ... this will be the last.

jh

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