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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Keyboard A keyboard calked by time’s fine tune my hands lined blue in treble staff and warring fingers hold the need to play hard truth till it is pretty soprano finds the highest place the cords to slam in strongest bass to court distrust until it sees the human side of victory Place me on the music stand this song is bursting from my mood and I can’t stand in curve and see how fine strung time is distancing my breathing in and breathing out percussion now in fling about would find the drizzle drain of verve and close it with one honest cord Strike sharp then flat and in between see the place of harmony so gentle be with finger pad touch it now and gather glad syncopated time moves on and I still yearn a song and I still yearn a song |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I played the ivories once...and was banished from ever touching them again!!!! enjoyably visual write...thanx Martie... |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
you are a great writer...i hope to be able to write this way one day  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautiful Martie... Another keeper for my library. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I've struggled with a piano for years..and enjoyed every second of it. Thanks for the fine portrayal. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martie - one song I play, soft notes on this guitar... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ahhh, but do they know how well you also play the piano? You combined both beautifully Martie, just beautiful. May a handshake, smile, kiss or a hug be the best present you give or receive this year. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely read as always Martie. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Your words always amaze me. Very nice. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ahhh yes, beautiful. love this Martie. Maree |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Shaking my head and wondering how you do this? You are so very gifted, and we are so very lucky to be blessed by your words. HUGS! |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"touch it now and gather glad syncopated time moves on and I still yearn a song and I still yearn a song" heard, the music of your words, and the yearning...beautiful, just beautiful!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You accorded this a fine melody, Martie... Thank you! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
More sauce on that pudding dear? Sowwee...couldn't resist.. hehehehe  K |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Martie, you will find this song, sweet friend, for your golden heart always hums like a music box filled with compassion for all! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and I can't stand in curve and see how fine strung time is distancing my breathing in and breathing out percussion now in fling about would find the drizzle drain of verve and close it with one honest cord ===================================== YOU tinkle my ivories  poetically speaking of course *L* winkiewinkie  Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - pianos cringe when I walk near - thanks for this other view!!! Paul |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Martie, Liked this so much. You seem to be multi-talented and I just want to thank you for sharing it with us. Such gifts you give....smiling here... Happy New Year, and may this be the best, ever.. Hugs and love, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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