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haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-12-29 01:37 PM


Long after the eager hour hand
sweeps swiftly past twelve AM.
Still before the sun embarks
it’s journey of the new day.
Two souls are involved in charisma,
as temptation unites their fires.

Fingers play eloquently with keys.
Eyes envision the sculpture of all.
Hearts tense in expectation unknown.
Changing bodies from and to while,
the swollen craves and the dripping desires.

Unsure of boundaries, the delight.
As mind caresses touches closer than law.
The want so nimble to taste.
Succulently wet, implausibly hard,
the recipe for, wee hour temptation.

more of my poems at->  thehayden.org lets-make-love-&-not-war.

© Copyright 2002 hayden a. james - All Rights Reserved
neveah5
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since 2002-11-22
Posts 197
Ohio
1 posted 2002-12-29 02:27 PM


"Succulently wet, implausibly hard,
the recipe for, wee hour temptation."
now that is sweet

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
2 posted 2002-12-31 05:51 AM


Very visual, extremely fine and well put. Really, really like this one.
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