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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-29 08:40 AM

The allure of you,
comes with the wind's mystery,
though you've sank so deeply
into my soul,
this hunger ravishes
the depths of my dreamless nights,
resolutions come
on glimpses of revelations,
that upon
your much desired capture,
i would probaly let you go,
free to ride the wind again,
as i'd be soon enchanted,
by the elusiveness of another

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-29-2002 12:11 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-12-29 09:44 AM

inkedgoddess
It is the way of life, enjoyed.

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-12-29 09:58 AM

The quest to capture and the completeness
of release....each in contrast, yet so
much a part of each other...

Very nicely written...thanx..

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Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-12-29 11:42 AM

inkedgoddes, I have a feeling this is one of your "observation" poems,
or is it from "participation"....

You are so talented with your poetry that I can't really tell.

Either way, I still enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-29-2002 11:43 AM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2002-12-29 01:14 PM

as i'd be soon enchanted,
by the elusiveness of another

It's the thrill of the chase not the prize that many of us seek

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2002-12-29 01:30 PM

Wonderful words. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-12-29 02:54 PM

inkedgoddess - a chase will be, yet to not chase would be a mystery...

BC

neveah5
Member

since 2002-11-22

Posts 197
Ohio

7 posted 2002-12-29 03:06 PM

simply beautifully written

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2002-12-29 03:16 PM

Do you think you can ever be satisfied? Once captured, it is always there. You can release but not forget because memories never fade only dim.

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