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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
I'm tired tired of you using me tired of you stomping on me on my heart my feelings Aren't we friends Don't you care Don't you see I went out of my way just for you I gave you a piece of me I had my heart out on my sleave and you stabbed it poked at it until it bled and it broke You made promises and I trusted You lied and I forgave You left me behind and I forgot No more You were my best friend you lied you broke promises you left me behind Now I've grown up I've become a responsible adult and you continued on lieing and breaking promises but now I'm leaving you behind |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
This was a very bitter piece, but I liked the anger and tone with it. If homosexuality is a disease, let's all call in queer to work: "Hello. Can't work today, still queer." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Many emotions, very real...but being put in order...taking control... Nicely done and good luck!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's what i say too! |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
Yes, I meant for this to be extremely bitter and angry. I think its a little too nice though. Its hard to be the better person. |
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