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Open Poetry #24

velvet, not vellum

Drexler_McStyles
Member

since 2002-11-18

Posts 195
Venice, Ca

0 posted 2002-12-28 10:50 PM

painted eyes
gravitating towards a confession
shattered dust upon my windowpane
unsettles my ferocious inadequacies

deep in a well, bedding with echoes
I have nurtured a calm abandonment
that only death
can disrupt

neveah5
Member

since 2002-11-22

Posts 197
Ohio

1 posted 2002-12-28 11:54 PM

"deep in a well, bedding with echoes
I have nurtured a calm abandonment
that only death
can disrupt"

WOW!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-29 02:32 AM

*mouth hanging open*

um....

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

3 posted 2002-12-29 06:33 PM

yep..it's a WOW, with a sting--enjoyed!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-12-29 10:40 PM

Strong words. I like this.
Sandra

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