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Saxoness
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0 posted 2002-12-28 10:26 PM



This is from my softer side,
because even when I run from you
I cry for you,
I need you.

I’m going to meet you
on the other side,
sink or swim here I am.
A broken Angel still has wings…
fold me against you.

When you kiss me
you’re all I see,
sweep me off my feet
and  kiss me again,
until tomorrow never comes.

Sometimes I cry for you
sometimes I laugh with you
and once in awhile I think I’m falling
and I want to take you with me.

Not everything Is dark,
there are so many good things,
and I can’t wait to discover them
with you.

Let’s hold onto each other
for today if no other time,
smile for me and touch my cheek,
And it will all be alright.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."
                                

© Copyright 2002 Angela Erin Burke - All Rights Reserved
neveah5
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since 2002-11-22
Posts 197
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1 posted 2002-12-29 12:00 PM


"This is from my softer side,
because even when I run from you
I cry for you,
I need you. "
this is very sweet..i feel this
and i really like how the whole poem flowed..

passing shadows
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2 posted 2002-12-29 02:19 AM


"a broken angel still has wings"

yes, this is a beautiful write

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