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Aenimal
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0 posted 2002-12-28 06:04 PM


I feel my soul
slipping through
these mortal casings
Osmosis
merging two
into one
into
akasha
into
love




[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-28-2002 06:12 PM).]

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regards2you
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1 posted 2002-12-28 06:15 PM



Aemimal,

Though I've never heard the word
"akasha" before, it sounds good
to me, as does this entire poem.

Enjoyed!

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Aenimal
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2 posted 2002-12-28 06:26 PM


Akasha, similar to the word Ether is an ancient Indian reference to the eternal, the all pervading substance the binds all within and beyond this reality. The beginning and the end. Time and space. Call it a God, call it a universal spirit, call it a force, call it whatever you may. It is eternal and spiritual love at its purest.
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3 posted 2002-12-28 08:12 PM


Raph, I enjoyd your poem, but I also enjoyed your explanation of the word "Akasha", too.

Thanks...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Aenimal
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4 posted 2002-12-28 08:39 PM


Ethel glad to be of service on both counts
inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2002-12-28 08:56 PM


yea, and its also the name of a porn star,
dominatrix, you badboy, check it out!

Startime
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6 posted 2002-12-28 09:02 PM


Simply stunning. I love the way it flowed down into the ultimate love.
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2002-12-28 10:01 PM


anyhow, besides the porn star crap , this poem does comes from a beautiful place and its a nice break in the action, for now
passing shadows
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8 posted 2002-12-29 02:43 AM


so silky sounding!
Aenimal
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9 posted 2002-12-29 02:48 AM


Thanks inked yeah i knew lol I was worried that when if people didn't get what akasha meant they'd search it on google or something and come up with that site

Startime that's very kind of you to say. I'm glad you enjoyed it

Inked I'm like you somewhere deep is the rose colored world

Dixie..ah silk, i once had a pair of silk boxers but had to stop wearing them because uh..well something always..came up..lol

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