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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
They Bleed You... Play with your emotions leave you with the notions sometimes the question "Do you love me now" ? They Need You... Until the burden outweighs the certain truth...sugar coats the bitter pill and yet you still ask "Do you love me now" ? They Seath You... Their words rob you of time and chant to your mind silently you hear their voices comtemplating your choices of whom you ask the question "Do you love me now" ? They Hurt You... Their influences on you shadow your world, in colors of blue they make you wonder beg you to ponder a different suggestion, of question, "Are you done...killing me now" ? Copyright © 2001 Dennis Hicks 12/17/01 |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
ouch! a great write.. really got what you meant (I think!) what I got sure was strong. Ahh so many people lying with their love. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perspective of a man, yes. I appreciate your words. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Not all of them, Dennis. Have you met Dixie (Passing Shadows)..smiling here, oh, this isn't Feb. yet, huh! Liked this and all the others but it is late here and need to go back to sleep. Wamr regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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