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Open Poetry #24

Help me save a life today

RebelFolk
Junior Member

since 2002-12-27

Posts 15
Nashville, TN

0 posted 2002-12-27 11:15 PM

Help me save a life today
I cannot say its worthy
Its filled with shame of shadows past
And dark and dismal dreams
Its lost its grasps from the Iron Rod
Its lonley and in need
It hangs upon a silken thread
Weary and afraid
The struggle seems too great too hard
The road too wide and long
Faces pass without a glance
No smile nor a wave
No thought for folks less fortunate
No worries but their own
A word or two could ease the pain
A smile would help indeed
So if by chance you look my way
Help me save a life today

Music is the language God used to create the Universe

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

1 posted 2002-12-27 11:22 PM

You have conveyed a sense of loneliness and need most convincingly. A fine piece of writing… and once again, welcome to PIP.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-28 02:18 AM

yes, a very lonely write...but hey...shadows passing aren't all that bad...

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