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GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2002-12-27 10:47 PM



And now, time is still again.
Yea, the world is moving
But mind is in a trance.

Construed by all the things
Which I have lost,
And loved so dear.

I am now in a place
Where that which you see
Is the sole thing I loathe.

For I now know the stillness
Of nothing.. of time;
When it is naught.

Its not a place which I despise
If I could live in my want of tears
I would forever. For now I know.

And time, its still for me.
The sheer pain of the loss
May stop it forever.

But the world still sees dancing.
One day, I’ll be there too..
At my time.

In heaven.

- And so it was that time stood still -

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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2002-12-27 11:02 PM


I am now in a place
Where that which you see
Is the sole thing I loathe.

I know the feeling well
and it's not a good place to be!
I think your headed in the right
direction though just by writing
your feelings down.  Be well GG~


garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-12-27 11:26 PM


GG, I like the way you poured your heart out here. There's much emotion felt in this poem. It does help to write about it, doesn't it?  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
3 posted 2002-12-27 11:34 PM


Thanks for your replies! Always so kind  
And sorry that you can relate.. ahh painful!

And yes, it does help to write it out . Though, I still miss her....

But a happy new year to you each!
Always, Alyssa


- And so it was that time stood still -

[This message has been edited by GG (12-28-2002 12:28 AM).]

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2002-12-28 02:16 AM


I feel it too...I enjoyed this
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