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Open Poetry #24

Sweet Surrender

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-27 08:42 PM

Sweet Surrender

a million
I love you(s)
or just one
I feel the
same
there is
something wild
in my heart
I can not
tame
and in this
savage soul
there is
a part so
tender
tucked away
in a
velvet storm
is a sweet
surrender

“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-12-28 01:08 AM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-28 01:09 AM

velvet storm

*smile*

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

3 posted 2002-12-29 11:24 PM

Dear Lady,
He must tuck you in very, very good.
You make it feel wonderful to your readers too.

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

4 posted 2002-12-29 11:38 PM

tucked away in a velvet storm....what a nice visual.

Very nice write of a Sweet Surrender.

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-12-29 11:47 PM

I like this, Helen....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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