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Kethry
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0 posted 2002-12-27 07:17 PM


Review, renew, go forth
ascend into the skies
cast off the yoke of wrath
and reach out for the prize

Go forth, review, renew
the time to grow is now
the best that you can do
is cast off fear and grow

Renew, go forth, review
revising all those plans
stand tall in knowing you
have learned because you can

Move on, review, renew
seeking as you go
leave bye the past of blue
stretch forth your hand and grow

Renew, move on, review
within the circle stand
the life force caught in you
is at your own command

Move on, go forth, renew
this time is in your grasp
accept the day that's new
and hold it in your clasp

Renew, rise up, go forth
the past soft fades away
it's time to find your worth.
Renew yourself this day

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



© Copyright 2002 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-12-27 07:22 PM


Lynne,  this would make a good New Year
resolution...  Very nicely done...

regards2you
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2 posted 2002-12-27 08:53 PM




Positive and uplifting. Enjoyed.


Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Marsha
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3 posted 2003-01-04 08:36 AM


Keth beloved one, what better way to start the New Year than to have your words ring out the old and ring in the new. Do you know that this is such a pearl of wisdom, just the blueprint we need for the beginning of the year.

I love it utterly utterly utterly, but of course YOU know that. One of your utterly utterly perfect timed poems

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-04 08:49 AM


Kethry, very good truth to live by. I enjoyed reading...  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2003-01-04 10:47 AM


You just reminded me it's time to renew a favorite subscription.
Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-01-04 01:57 PM


Kethry - this needs to be posted on a wall so all can read it's positive words...

BC

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7 posted 2003-01-04 02:05 PM


outstanding!
Corinne
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8 posted 2003-01-04 03:46 PM


Perfect new year poem!

Cor

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-01-04 04:38 PM


well written, and something I am telling myself daily now. *s
hugss and a happy new year to you Keth
M

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