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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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0 posted 2002-12-27 02:28 PM



images, left
sentances lying on the floor.
images, right
clinging to the door.
images, what a sight.
of folklore.

images, up
paragraphs painted on the walls.
images, down
a view of the chalkboard.
images, nothing like a clown.
images,  I cannot see.
nor want to be bored.

But you see here,
I am me,
sitting up in a tree.
Writing poetry.
About someone dear to me.

GODBLESS



© Copyright 2002 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-12-27 03:52 PM


Hi Kellie  
It's good to see you here.
You know, sometimes it's good just to get by ourselves and "write poetry about someone dear". Don't you think?  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2002-12-27 04:08 PM


Beautiful images here Kellie.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
3 posted 2002-12-27 05:40 PM


reminds me of just seeing poetry in everything your looking onto...
and sometimes (only sometimes) that is the most glorious of all things.

A great write keep it up.
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -

Kellie_Cantrell
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4 posted 2002-12-28 01:32 PM


This is about Larry's daughter.
Kellie_Cantrell
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5 posted 2002-12-28 01:46 PM


Gary- Thank you. I really enjoyed writing this piece.

Suetang- Thanks for the sweet thoughts.

GG- Thanks Allyssa. I apprieciate the kind words.

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