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Krawdad
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0 posted 2002-12-27 01:20 PM



just a little scribble . . .



not a measure


I get lost in the vastness of the moment
I am neither there nor where
I am not a measure or a count
I am nowhere
I am everywhere
I am timeless

I would not be rescued if I could





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© Copyright 2002 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2002-12-27 01:22 PM


throwing you a winter-green lifesaver
Krawdad
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2 posted 2002-12-27 01:33 PM


yummmmmm

thanks!

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2002-12-27 01:37 PM


you're welcome

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (12-27-2002 01:38 PM).]

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-12-27 01:43 PM


Much said in a few words...........
Hummmmmmmmmmm........  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

jwesley
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5 posted 2002-12-27 06:35 PM


Me too...

enjoyed...

jwesley

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-12-27 07:15 PM


Really great write.  ThisDiamond
Kethry
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7 posted 2002-12-27 07:47 PM


Krawdad,
I know this moment in time and I also would not be rescued from it.

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2002-12-27 07:49 PM


I don't believe I would want to be rescued.
Good write.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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