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dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26
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Missouri,USA

0 posted 2002-12-27 01:36 AM



If I whisper
will you come
send your shadow
to me with breath
of renewed life?


If I whisper
will you bring
your touch
mend the broken
dreams of the past
invigorate the
chance of tommorow?


I wonder
why this scares me so?
Perhaps, the passion
would silence...my screams


8/16/02


© 2002 Dennis Hicks

© Copyright 2002 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2002-12-27 01:38 AM


I like to scream sometimes...it's good for the soul!
dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26
Posts 267
Missouri,USA
2 posted 2002-12-27 02:17 AM


Yes indeed Passing Shadows.
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2002-12-28 12:31 PM


Passion is a slow burn
and the warmest fire!!

Another nice write by you~

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