navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #24 » An Emperor's New Clothes
Open Poetry #24
Post A Reply Post New Topic An Emperor's New Clothes Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-27 01:24 AM


I pull the skin
up and over
Tossed on the pile
with others
I've tried to wear
Nothing seems
to suit me
These skins
they are not mine
A cloak of shadow?
I always did
look best in black
For awhile
at least
in thought
it hung devine
upon these
wretched bones
How easily
skins are
worn threadbare
I always end
naked and shivering

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-27-2002 01:35 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2002-12-27 01:26 AM


I looked best in greens and browns, I think.

Good write...nice imagery

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
2 posted 2002-12-27 01:30 AM


Great imagery. OK, so where is the photo that goes with this one?
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
3 posted 2002-12-27 01:32 AM


Dixie I'm sure you'd look good in anything

Kacy type in 'German sheppard pics' into any search engine and you should find a suitable picture though most likely more appealing..

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-27-2002 02:24 AM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2002-12-27 07:55 AM


so what is it?
the black/dark doesnt suit you right now either.....just let it coast for a while........does this make sense?

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2002-12-27 08:07 AM


Aenimal
Go back and dream again. LOL

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
6 posted 2002-12-27 10:35 AM


Raph......
           

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
7 posted 2002-12-27 11:45 AM


inked I've been good, i've been bad, etc..i've been all these people that i', really not and lately i've been dressed in shadow. but all these things they aren't me. most days i don't know who i am anymore.

Seymour ???

Thanks Ethel


Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
8 posted 2002-12-27 12:04 PM


Hehe, so I went to the shep site and there you were. What a cutie! You'd look good in a dancing rainbow lites collar.

Now everyone will be on the lookout for you.

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
9 posted 2002-12-27 12:33 PM


Ahhh....come now....I am sure you look ok
in anything you want to....Did I mention
even a white stripe on a long fluffy tail?

Just kiddin' ...  enjoyed the write...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
10 posted 2002-12-27 12:43 PM


Ah Kacy I'm glad you like it but please no collars they don't suit me except of my own making

Magnus I make it a point NEVER to wear anything ...fluffy LOL
thanks for stopping in

Andrew Scott
Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
11 posted 2002-12-27 07:48 PM


An excellent read.  As for a new set of skin... make mine ironed and pressed please.  Thanks for sharing.
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
12 posted 2002-12-27 10:36 PM


Thank you Andrew I'm glad you enjoyed it and as for the skins i'll send my tailor right over
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #24 » An Emperor's New Clothes

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary