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Still Winds |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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.jpg) Still Winds There was no wind as prairie chickens quickly dispersed having come to the newly formed pond to drink. Sunlight plays lovingly upon snow and ice, as in comfort of down and fur one can believe this is but sand on a deserted beached day. The trees will soon rot at their roots, falling over in shy of disappear, feeding new life that will evolve as spring waters gather from their natural runs, and pool, here, where I come to sit, in all seasons to listen to the wind even when there isn’t any. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Very pretty. I loved the last three lines. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Even when the stillness brings to flutter the breeze... I too liked this very much, and yes, particularly the ending...Nicely done KJ... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So peaceful and poetic...and such a pretty picture to go with your thoughts. Happy New Year Sunshine~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Enjoyed this one. Gave me a tranquill feeling inside. Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
magnificent! just a beautiful write, and wonderful ending. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
big ole siggggghs--beautiful! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you can always see the wind if you look hard enuf, yes, it leaves its voice behind in everything it bestows its touch upon, forever touched by its passage |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Karilea...very tranquil and much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, this looks like a beautiful place to go "to listen to the wind, even when there isn't any".  And, if not for the trees, it does kinda look like the beach.  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-27-2002 09:40 AM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
The Sun overides your picture, poem and outlook, how? Enjoyed |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea~ Just beautiful, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah my friend, you listen.....and you write..... and we are blessed when you do. A beauty from your pen of grace Sunshine. Wonderful write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I used to have a place where I went all seasons and adored it, so know the feeling as I sure miss it. Loved the photo too Sunshine. May a handshake, smile, kiss or a hug be the best present you give or receive this year. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
What is there about solitude and a dab of meditation in a quiet place that so draws our souls? Love your work. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Karilea, this added to the peace of my day. Thank you for listening and writing. Such a serene picture; such a special place. Take one moment in time ...... Reflect, meditate, and listen To the voice of silence. Hugs, Marti |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I liked the last three lines, too, Pat, Magnus...thank you! Blues, I do love my new camera...thank you... That was the feeling I wanted to portray, kitkat...thank you... Passing Shadows, you are too kind... I heard that sigh, sandpiper...thank you... too true, inkedgoddess, thank you for reading... Thank you, NancyLee... garysgirl, so true, in a cold kind of way...thank you... Richard, if I knew, I would whisper the answer to you... Thank you Vicky... Donna, having you come by to peek in is always a pleasure, thank you... thank you, Vandana... Mysteria, we need these places, don't we? I'm not sure, KayJay, but I sure am glad when I can share a moment...thank you... Glad to give back to you, Marti, what you always share with us...thank you! |
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